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Petit raisin


Petit raisin
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Copyright: Ros Dag (rosana) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 49 W: 0 N: 31] (475)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06-15
Categories: Trees
Camera: Nikon D70, Nikkor 18-70 mmDX ED
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-10-04 10:13
Viewed: 4269
Points: 4
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Hi I know it's autumn so why show a spring raisin, because in Montreal these raisins are the joy and meal of all the birds & squirrels once they are ripe, so I don't have anything to show you that is ripe & juicy...

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To klemmg: Thanks Gabirosana 1 10-11 13:23
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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4432 W: 248 N: 4028] (13270)
  • [2005-10-04 10:55]

Hello Ros!
Wonderful capture.I liked lighting,POV and composition a lot.Thanks foır sharing.

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  • nofer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1190 W: 366 N: 811] (2307)
  • [2005-10-07 14:53]

“tima composiÁ„o.
Boas cores.
Nitidez e contraste.
Bom trabalho!
TFS
Reynaldo

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  • klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719)
  • [2005-10-10 17:58]
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Hi Rosana!
I would suggest a less center-oreinted composition to make it more interesting. The upper edge of the raisin is OE and all detail is lost there (plain white).
Regards,
Gabi

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