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paradis
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Copyright: marco vallee (marcolyff) (53)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-07
Categories: Mountain
Camera: PENTAX M1
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/125 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-01-13 8:10
Viewed: 4164
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
photo prise durent un voyage de kayak dans le secteur de SM3 barrage d'hydro quebec,nous nous preparions a souper devant ce merveilleux coucher de soleil ! le paradis quoi!!!!!
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A nice landscape shot. I think it is framed well, and colors are nice. Your name in the upper left corner is pretty distracting to the picture. I would eliminate it. Since you used a tripod, a smaller apeture such as f8 to f11 would help bring out more sharpness and detail in yor scene.

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  • japie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1814 W: 100 N: 1904] (5187)
  • [2005-01-15 22:50]

The composition and exposure of this beautiful setting is great.

Well done and thanks for posting

Hi Marco
Just had a quick browse, and I really think you have VERY nice pictures in your portfolio, and not too well browsed. One of the reasons may be a language thing, many of us are already commenting in a second language. such as most of us from SA, and due to time constraints, we have not the time to translate the French, of other launguage, notes. Hence, since notes forms such an important part of the posts on this site, I think you "suffer" from this. You should look at some of the posts by RAP, he is Spanish or Portugeuse, but he uses a translation programme for all his notes, and he is much appreciated.
I write this as a comment,because I like the pictures you post.
The colours here are very nice, the pinks are beautiful and the blue to lcks wrk very well.
A beautiful scene. Try a slight crop on the top, say 1cm off, and look at the composition then, you will get more of a third to two thirds, enhancing the impact of the picture more thanthe loss of the bit of sky.

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