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the river under the clouds


the river under the clouds
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Copyright: Franco Degani (degani) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 130 W: 0 N: 322] (2607)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-08
Categories: River
Camera: Nikon D 80
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-11-22 1:54
Viewed: 3081
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I took this picture from the roof of a car that was taking the tourists for a tour in the canyon, we passed through a beautiful country
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Howdy Franco! Amazing place, amazing mountains, wonderful landscape. Very original composition. Great effect. Good luck!

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  • Heaven Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 123 N: 2341] (7912)
  • [2007-11-22 22:56]

Hi Franco!

I like the composition of your picture and the subject it shows. But it lacks a bit of the lighting management: the darks are a little bit too dark, the bright tones - especially those in the clouds - are far too bright and partially burnt. I know it is very difficult to expose correctly in harsh contrast conditions as here. I personally then measure my exposure on the bright parts and lighten up the dark tones in my editing software.

Kind regards
Markus

this is a great shot of the topography of the area...the eroded patterns tell us the river runs fast and hard in season
the sky is well handled and kept in an exposure range to show the cloud and blue
a lot of people will do this with a pola but it can be over worked
this is fine
cheers
geof

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