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Awkward Grace

Awkward Grace
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Copyright: Michael Hastriter (devildoc) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 133 W: 57 N: 186] (2851)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-04-11
Categories: Birds
Camera: Nikon D7000, AF-S NIKKOR 18-200mm 1:3.5 5.6 GII ED, B+W 72mm 010 UV-Haze MRC
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2012-04-16 23:59
Viewed: 1987
Points: 4
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Taken in the Phoenix Zoo.
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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4072 W: 133 N: 7096] (23735)
  • [2012-04-17 11:23]
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Hi Michael.
Precise exposure and wonderful reproduction of the colours and every feather of the bird. I also like freezing of the water and attractive small waves on the surface. Cropping on the left side of the image is strong a little bit. I prefer more free space on the direction of the movement. My kind regards and TFS.

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  • tuslaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2754 W: 282 N: 4931] (19883)
  • [2012-04-17 18:48]
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Hello Mike,
White is very hard to get the correct exposure on, but you nailed it with this shot. Really good detail and beautiful colors, but must agree with Alexei, you need more space on the side the direction of movement is heading. great shot!!

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