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High desert grasses


High desert grasses
Photo Information
Copyright: Alice Falzone (MoscaPhoto) (5)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-03-18
Categories: Desert
Camera: nikon D3, 24-70f2.8L
Exposure: f/22, 1/80 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2011-05-10 17:05
Viewed: 3173
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Road trip from Portland to the Grand Canyon taken late winter 2011. Somewhere in the Nevada high deserts near sunset. Just off of one of the 30+ miles of straightaways that are everywhere in that beautiful state. image copyright http://www.MoscaPhoto.com


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To Hormon_Manyer: thank you and hi! :))))MoscaPhoto 2 05-14 00:07
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Hi Alice,

Welcome to TrekNature most importantly. Enjoy your stay on the site while posting your photos and commenting others'.

Your starting landscape's nice, but there's a handful of things on it I'd like to see somehow else (this is just my personal opinion). First of all the photo has an overdose of contrast and too deep shadows. Secondly: the horizon's tilting to right. Thirdly: I'm not sure if it was intentional but there's a heavy vignette-alike effect on the edges of the pic. No. 4.: the watermark is a bit pointless.

I tried to show my ideas about how to improve the photo in the workshop - please see the steps of editing there.

Well, I'm looking forward to see more nature shots of you here on TN, because your website's really great. Best regards from Hungary (Central Europe), László

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  • tuslaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2754 W: 282 N: 4931] (19883)
  • [2011-05-11 19:28]
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Hello Alice, and welcome to TN.
A beautifully shown image showing the natural grassland and snowcapped mountains from this part of Nevada. Colors are well saturated and I really like the overall composition. Excellent exposure and great DOF. Hope to see more of your work in the future.
Ron

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  • Adanac Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1273 W: 1 N: 6188] (21378)
  • [2011-05-11 20:43]
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Hello Alice,
A well thought out landscape image with great depth and many different layers with gorgeous light. Great start here on TrekNature Alice, welcome and hope to see more. You work in the dangerous business of Wedding Photography, I think shooting bears is much safer.
Rick

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