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Morning kiss


Morning kiss
Photo Information
Copyright: Carmem Busko (carmem_busko) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 76 W: 32 N: 91] (431)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-02-21
Categories: Insects
Camera: Canon PowerShot A300
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/1250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-08-24 3:50
Viewed: 6355
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
It was a windy morning.. the hungry butterfly was easy to catch, but the flowers don´t. I tried several shots, this is one of them.

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Carmem, Very nice color with a background that is pleasing and accents your subject superbly. Whenever possible, If you can identify the species it helps. Also time of day,lighting used(if any),etc.is also helpful. Your DOF is good, considering the angle of your shot(those wing-tips always seem to fall-out!)Also,If you cropped this photo,you may have left a bit more space at the top..All in all,a Great photo!!

  • Great 
  • japie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1814 W: 100 N: 1904] (5187)
  • [2004-08-24 13:30]

Very well captured wind and all. Some advice - if the wind blows, you have to sway backwards and forwards with the flower - Just joking!. I really like you image, it has very good focus (you must have been swaying) and the ODF is excellent. Thanks for posting

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2004-08-25 9:51]

I like it, the wings look a bit tatty, poor thing. Very nice colour and composition. It really needs a note though.

Points tomorrow.

  • Great 
  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2150 W: 319 N: 4263] (16942)
  • [2004-11-21 17:16]
  • [2]

Carmem, a foto é tocante. Pode ser que eu esteja, em parte, sendo levado pelo título que você escolheu. É que você utilizou metáfora, foi poética. Eu, em minha rudeza, diria que a borboleta está se alimentando ou qualquer outra coisa óbvia.

No mais, bela foto (gosto das asas entrecortadas da borboleta).

Lívio

Olá Carmem.
Bela imagem você conseguiu nesta manhã !
Mesmo com as asas desta borboleta estando bem danificada, sua técnica e a composição a tornou unica !!!
Parabéns .
Abraços
Henriqueº

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