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Okay.....take a shot;)

Okay.....take a shot;)
Photo Information
Copyright: Jarek Sulik (Jarkinson) (68)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-13
Categories: Birds
Camera: Sony Alpha 100, Tamron 70-300mm Macro
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/1000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-04-17 15:10
Viewed: 3738
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
That's my first photo posted here. Hope you'll enjoy it. Tomorrow I'll upload next one. Bye!
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To morswinek: Dziekuje:)Jarkinson 1 04-19 15:39
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  • Bac Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 93 W: 3 N: 33] (486)
  • [2007-04-17 15:47]
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The colour of the water is really nice, the bird takes a good position and the composition is good. It's a good idea to have the main subject on the right side of the picture (not in the center), the negatif point is that oart of the bird is burnt (totaly white), maybe with a shorter speed had you had a better white, but i'm not sure. I think it's a good beginning,TFS.

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  • joey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1739 W: 224 N: 6872] (24909)
  • [2007-04-17 16:11]

Hello Jarek,
this is a beautiful shot of a swan.
Great contrast and a brilliant composition.
Well done,

good focus nice bird exprsssion good water colors and patterns.

Everything is perfect about the shot i liked the compostion and the DOV.
Excellent pics to start with waiting for more from you

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  • NINIX Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 47 N: 355] (3001)
  • [2007-04-18 4:26]

Hi Jarek,

Good picture! Welcome to the world of Treknature. I am happy to see that you choose the swan as your introduction. I am looking forward to see mor Polish swans.


Hendrik (NINIX)

Witaj Jarku.
Pieknie skadrowales to ujecie, kolory sa nasycone, dobra jet tez ostrosc. Twoje zjecie swietnie oddaje "klasyczne" spojrzenie labedzia - majestatyczne, ostrozne, ale ciekawskie.

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