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Aile de papillon


Aile de papillon
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Copyright: Marie Proue (marieproue) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 564 W: 67 N: 437] (3674)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-04
Categories: Insects
Camera: Canon EOS Digital Rebel, Canon 100mm F2.8 Macro
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/15 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-04-19 15:06
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Points: 34
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
AIle de papillonque j'ai prise à l'exposition papillon en liberté à Montréal au jardin botanique, je n'avais pas encore reçu vos conseils.
Je sais que la tête est hors focus, je commence enmacro.
Merci

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si tu travailles à f/2.8 et 1/15 ça implique que tu dois quasi obligatoirement utiliser 1 tripod
la macro rend humble et ne permet pas les à peu près !
en macro la profondeur de champ est très (très) petite et il faut rapidement utiliser des ouvertures plus petites mais là c'est encore plus obligatoire d'utiliser un tripod
aleks ;)
encouragements

A good picture although really blurred. Try using a tripd.
Nick :-)

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  • lgfoto Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 194 W: 13 N: 279] (1536)
  • [2007-04-19 15:53]

Very nicely composed crop of this beauty. Good POV Marie.TFS.

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  • ridvan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 498 W: 0 N: 1136] (5205)
  • [2007-04-19 16:07]

selam marie; nice shot of this butterflys very beatiful colours and POV despite alittle noisy on it. TFS well done
regards
ridvan

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  • methos Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 213 W: 51 N: 281] (1189)
  • [2007-04-19 16:51]
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Hi Marie,
To me it seems the whole subject is OOF. The values of exposure are really not helping you.
The ISO 100 is not either. Do not be afraid to use higher ISO numbers. I even take pic at 1600. With macro shots you really need a steady hand and short exposure times. If you do not have a tripod (wich is not particularly helpful when shooting butterflies because they move so much) the best bet is to use high ISO. If ou do not have excellent light that is.
The noise generated by high ISO numbers can easily be removed and the benefits far outweigh the risks. For example if you took this pic at f2.8 and 800ISO I bet you would have at least 1/100 exposure time which is way better than 1/15.
Hope I have been of somme assistance.
Do not give up!

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  • Adanac Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1273 W: 1 N: 6188] (21378)
  • [2007-04-19 22:05]
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Bonjour Marie,
Although a little soft on focus this beautiful composition is well colored, you would benefit from a higher ISO and tripod. Thanks for sharing Marie.
Rick

Hi Marie, a little out of focus but wonderful colors, have a nice week end, ciao Silvio

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  • nimou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 148 W: 1 N: 687] (3171)
  • [2007-04-20 14:11]

Dommage du focus, la palette de couleur est belle Marie, Bon angle de prise de vue. Salut

bonsoir marie
excellente cette image de papillon, tres belles couleurs nettes et détails parfaitement présents
bien vu, amitiès
edith

Salut Marie,
Comme tu le sais, il est flou un peu... Mais c'est un bel effort et je comprends ta note, tu es à la bonne place pour apprendre. Les couleurs sont belles et la composition aussi, avec une bonne profondeur de champs mais 1/15 sec sans trépied relève de l'impossible. Merci,
Claudine

Bonjour Marie
Magnifique photo de ce joli macro de ce beau papillon! Les couleurs et la composition sont superbes. La netteté est parfaite.Le bg est super beau,Il u a une légère surexposition sur le haut des ailes. Merci de partager!
Bravo et au revoir....JP

I can sympathise with your difficulty in photographing this butterfly - I visited the Montreal Botanical gardin in April, and many of my pictures were blurry when I was able to get them up on my computeer. Still, good colors and contrast here.

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  • Maite Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 998 W: 65 N: 1270] (5199)
  • [2007-04-25 9:37]

Hello Marie
What a marvellous Blue Morpho you captured here!
I like very much the point of view and the colors. The composition is great. A pity that it is not a bit more well focused, but really beautiful and eye-catching anyway.
My compliments and TFS.
Maite

Hello Marie
Such beautiful colours you've captured. A little out of focus. Nicely composed, and soft light. Very pretty.
TFS Janice :D

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  • Mana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1772 W: 36 N: 5597] (18598)
  • [2007-09-11 20:41]

Hi Marie,
Wonderful close-up shot with lovely colours and patterns on its wings. Though the focus is a bit soft it look beautiful among the greens. Great lighting. Excellent POV to capture this fine pose and very nicely composed. Kudos.
TFS.
Sumon

bonjour marie
pour donner un exemple aux explications que je viens de te donner suite a ton commentaire sur mon papillon argus,je reviens sur celui-ci.
je vois que tu n'avais utilisé que 100iso,or le canon que nous utilisons tout deux est largement exploitable a 400iso ce qui aurait permis une vitesse plus elevée afin de limiter le flou de bougé et aussi peut etre de fermer plus le diaphragme pour plus de profondeur de champ,mais je crois qu'il ne fallait utiliser le flash dans cette voliere alors l'un oui mais peut etre pas les deux.
j'espere t'avoir eclairé.
laurent

Hi Marie,nice capture colours and brightness very good beautiful work.

Regards,Hakan

Bonjour Marie,
My compliment towards this outstanding photo of butterfly!
very good clarity with awesome texture and pattern of the butterfly with good pov!
good details too
very well done
greeting from NZ
cheers
Tony

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  • arfer Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2731 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2007-09-27 8:42]

Hello Marie

The composition is very good ,the colours are well saturated.The focus is a bit soft but the butterfly is very beautiful.TFS

Rob

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