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Focused
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Copyright: Evelynn Smith (Evelynn) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2025 W: 741 N: 3285] (14454)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-11-26
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon 30D, Canon 300mm f2.8 + 2.xII extender, @ ISO 400
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-03-26 11:32
Viewed: 3273
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
It is always a guessing game as to which lens to have on the camera. One often ends up with too much lens for the subject... as here. I think what makes this image work is the relationship between the heron's extended neck and the out of focus foliage pattern in the background. I do like the intensity of his/her focused stare.

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  • Great 
  • PaulH Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1137 W: 26 N: 3879] (13882)
  • [2008-03-26 11:42]

Hi Evelynn,
we are neighbours today :o) I think you actually had the right lens here! It's allowed you to create a great POV and excellent framing. DOF is perfect and details are superb. I love the blurred plants in the background too, well done!
Paul

I love this photo - it's so unusual and it stands out. The framing is perfect, the photo is sharp, the colors blend into the the background, and overall, the composition is an A+.

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  • NinaM Gold Star Critiquer [C: 773 W: 3 N: 1157] (4077)
  • [2008-03-26 12:51]

Hello Evelynn, this is a superb shot, absolutely beautiful, with great deep colours, very natural, and the pose of the heron is unique, so close. The composition is beautiful too and I really like the head and neck of the bird crossing the frame. Thank you,

Francine

  • Great 
  • waylim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 296 W: 8 N: 489] (1765)
  • [2008-03-26 13:09]

Evelynn,
Another really great image from you. Look at the details even at this limited file size, it so clear and sharp. Colors are natural and beautiful. The soft BG really enhand the detail of the heron. I really enjoyed it. Thanks so much.
Way

  • Great 
  • Juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2232 W: 10 N: 2971] (16891)
  • [2008-03-26 14:18]

Hola Evelynn,
intensa concentración, hermoso retrato.
buen trabajo y encuadre,
saludos

  • Great 
  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1393 W: 119 N: 5267] (23955)
  • [2008-03-26 14:28]

Great image Evelynn, we can see the great concentration that bird has on it's prey. Well composed, good technique, everything is fine, thanks!

Mario

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  • nglen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2883 W: 30 N: 9683] (36145)
  • [2008-03-26 14:50]

Hi Evelynn. This is a fien close up ofthe Heron. as you say such a focused stare. you have good detail and colour. with a good DOF. well done TFS.
Nick..

Hi Evelynn,
What an excellent capture of this Heron, and your right about the background, it really does stand out, beautiful eye detail, and well framed, all the best Cheers Rick :)

Hello Evelynn,
Nice close up shot, good sharpness and depth of field, nice composition and pov, lovely colors and great pose.
Angela

  • Great 
  • Luis52 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1175 W: 8 N: 4240] (15809)
  • [2008-03-26 18:22]

Hola Evelynn.
Well focus. Excellent sharpness, lovly colors. You did a great work here Evelynn. The BG is also very nice to me.
Saludos
Luis52.

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  • Adanac Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1273 W: 1 N: 6188] (21378)
  • [2008-03-26 19:51]

Hello Evelynn,
Intensity for sure, quality close up image positively. Splendid work my friend.
Rick

  • Great 
  • manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3089 W: 230 N: 6774] (23770)
  • [2008-03-26 23:44]

I love the curvature in this long neck.
So much tension and intensity... and focus!
Great sharpness and colors...
Stunning composition and crop.
That neck is ready to snap out any moment!
TFS. : )

Hi Evelynn,
Great shot that shows very well the heron's intent gaze!
Good exposure & focus with sharp head and blurred BG
Well done
Albert

  • Great 
  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2234 W: 188 N: 1912] (8073)
  • [2008-03-27 5:36]

Hi Evelynn,
this is a gorgeous portrait of the Heron, looks like its focused in on something. Great work on the close up, sharp, a lot of detail and the colors are great.
Very nice work.
TFS..Sky

  • Great 
  • arfer Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2731 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2008-03-27 20:30]

Hello Evelynn

Both you and the heron!
The POV is excellent with wonderful DOF.
The OOF BG is lovely.
Nicely composed in the frame,
Lovely natural colours.
TFS

Rob

  • Great 
  • uleko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3396 W: 172 N: 3310] (10940)
  • [2008-03-28 4:44]

Hello Evelynn,
I wish I had those sharp eyes!! Great close-up of the Heron stalking a prey. Excellent sharp capture in natural colours. Nice background too and I like the framing.
Many thanks, Ulla

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  • lizzie Gold Star Critiquer [C: 207 W: 0 N: 605] (2855)
  • [2008-03-28 13:44]

Hi Evelynn,

Great close-up!
perfect focus giving excellent details.
Love the pose of the heron, looks so concentrated....maybe ready to catch something!

Very well done!

Lise

Another fine image from Ridgefield. That must have been a fun trip. The BG gray gives it wintery look rather than late fall. The framing is especially nice in this composition.

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