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"Broken Beauty"


Photo Information
Copyright: Mario Jimenez Jr (sbc2758) (4)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11-13
Categories: Insects
Camera: Canon EOS 1D Mark II, 70-200f2.8L IS, B+W UV Haze MRC
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-02 12:57
Viewed: 3272
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This photograph was taken at the San Antonio Botanical Gardens. The first thing you notice is the broken wing. Rough day I suppose!!
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Welcome Mario to TN intresting 1st image, the butterfly is well captured, the seed pod it is sat on is a little forward of the focus, though you could harden it up with burntool. and I would be tempted to crop the bottom off below the next pod down, it puts the butterfly on a good diagonal to the whle image, IMO
as part of posting to TN it is usual to also inclued a few notes about the subject and where and how you captured the image, we consider part of the teaching learning process, it also help the more expert members offer better advice to any image you post.
Your Robert looking forward to further posts from you. TFS

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  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1835 W: 301 N: 4287] (14767)
  • [2006-01-05 2:11]

An excellent first performance, Mario.
Nice composition and point of view.

I wish you the most cordial welcome on TrekNature.
In the pleasure to admire your next posts and to read your notes and critics.
Thank you for sharing.

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