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Copyright: laurent crouzier (marmottelolo) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1769 W: 424 N: 2889] (14697)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-10
Categories: Birds
Camera: Konica Minolta Dimage Z3
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/15 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Rouge-gorge / Robin (part. 1), Robins, 50-60 points (chapter 5) [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-01-18 12:59
Viewed: 6666
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 66
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
bonjour a tous
aujourd'hui c'est de nouveau le petit rouge gorge.
cette fois je n'est pas fait de cadre car pour eviter d'avoir la table sur laquelle il etait posé,j'ai cadré plus serré et les pattes sont deja legerement coupées.


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Aucun problème pour les jambes decoupee. Il est claire, colorée et bien composée.

Avec respect, Petru

Hi,
Great shot,details, colours, etc!
Well done!
Ana:)

Wonderful photo, composition and technically wise! Thanks for sharing - Xplorator Radu

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  • chiliu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1457 W: 0 N: 1176] (6526)
  • [2006-01-18 19:21]

Hi Laurent,
Very nice shot on this beautiful robin,
great colour and excellent POV.
Thanks for sharing!

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2150 W: 319 N: 4263] (16942)
  • [2006-01-18 23:11]

Laurent, another very nice bird shot.

I like pov and bg a lot.

Great colors.

Maybe, I'd try to add some more sharpness, but it's just and opinion.

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  • TAZ Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2241 W: 47 N: 3167] (10926)
  • [2006-01-19 1:43]
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Il est trop mignon ce Rouge-gorge. Vous allez contrarier les puristes avec les pattes coupées :-))) Par contre plus d'espace à droite qu'à gauche pour le cadrage aurait été mieux dans les règles de l'art ;-)
Compliments Laurent.

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  • manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3089 W: 230 N: 6774] (23770)
  • [2006-01-19 3:07]

A perfect portrait of this robin, Laurent.
He sure was posing for you. Well done and TFS. : )

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  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2636 W: 74 N: 9091] (31094)
  • [2006-01-19 3:11]

Well earned smile now, critique later :-)

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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4432 W: 248 N: 4028] (13270)
  • [2006-01-19 3:55]

Hello Laurent!
Wonderful capture.I liked pose of bird,
catchlight in eyes,POV,colors,simple BG,
framing and composition are perfect.
TFS...:-)

Beautiful DOF and detail. Colours look great. Pity about the legs. But well done nonetheless.

TFS

Hi Laurent,
very nice portrait shot, great sharpness, colours and lighting. This is a very nice and lovely composition. Well captured too. Thanks for sharing.
br
Heinz

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  • Dando Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 637 W: 32 N: 792] (3084)
  • [2006-01-19 4:48]

Great robin picture, love the DOF, detail and colour, brilliant or très bon I think you say. TFS Dean.

Hello Laurent!
Nice portrait of robin, bright colours, good pose. I like it.
Besr wishes,
Elena

This one is a beauty, Laurent! Your DOF is spot on, and his pose is great... Textures are good too, I can almost feel the feathers... Good colours and details!
Regards,
Pablo -

Hi Laurent,
this was close. The low POV is very good.
Nice colours and good details.
It's a bit bright and it's pity you cut the feet.
Well done.

Nice closeup Laurent with a good POV and sharp detail. Of course, a bit more space in front & less behind the bird would be better..
Well done.
Thank You!

Wonderful capture of this cute bird, Laurent.

Lovely colors, details, POV, BG, and exposure.

I miss the feet, in this otherwise nicely composed shot.

Well done and thank you!

Hi Laurent!

Beautiful shot!
Wonderful bird, good DOF!

TFS,
Christian

bonjour Laurent,
close-up Très bon, soit peut-être très peu hors de foyer, et pense qu'il pouvait s'améliorer l´ encadre. Couleurs très jolies et bon détails. Salutations Hernán

This is a very nice aproach, Laurent.
The close up is very good. I agree with other members about cutting the feet, but for the rest is a great potrait.
Thanks very much for sharing.
Have a nice week.

Jolies couleurs naturelles et bonne netteté des détails Dommage pour les pattes coupées et le cadrage trop serré à droite. Toutefois, cette photo a du mérite.

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  • optic Gold Star Critiquer [C: 322 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-01-31 17:22]

Bonjour Laurent,
Magnifique image et très belle définition, les couleurs contrastées sont magnifiques. J'aurais cadré l'oiseau un peu plus à gauche pour laisser de l'espace devant et un petit zoom arrière pour dévoiler les pattes ! dans l'ensemble une belle prise :-)

Merci du partage,
Bons souhaits du Québec!
Christian

hello laurent
super couleurs
félicitations

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2006-02-07 17:23]

Hello Laurent, nice shot. It's a good pose and the details are good. Maybe it's a little overexposed and I would like to see the feet in the shot too. Well done.

Hi Laurent,

Nice close up with very good details of the b robin.
You just cut his fingernails. I would also have put more space on the right.

TFS,
Pedro

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  • Luce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 80 W: 0 N: 15] (58)
  • [2006-04-06 9:11]

Bonjour, une très jolie photo. La netteté et l'exposition sont bien réussies. Le cadrage serré et la composition bien choisis. L'arrière plan flou est très beau. Bravo, belle image.

Laurent,

Excellent shot! The robin is very sharp against the background, showing very good detail in his feathers. Background is just slightly noisy. Great colour tone in the Robins breast.

...tim

Hi Laurent, excelent shot of this butiful bird.
MArjan

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  • zeca Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 373 W: 14 N: 539] (2887)
  • [2006-05-02 22:24]

Pretty bird, Laurent! They are always cute, and you have many nice pictures showing this wonderful animals. Nice to see it in sharp details, and the contrast to the unfocused BG is excelent.
Cheers!
Zeca

I would have probably be better to see the table than cutting the fingers. Empty space should be in front of him not behind.
I tried to sharpen the eye but didn't get any beter than your pic. So I didn't post a workshop.
Great pic anyway. Thanks for sharing.

Hallo Laurent,

Very good photo of Europe's favorite bird! Excellent composition, colors and sharpness. DOF is also very good! Good exposure too! TFS!

Regards,
Eddie

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  • Hil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 696 W: 13 N: 1407] (5035)
  • [2006-09-30 17:19]

Hi Laurent,

What a great shot, I do love Robins and this one is a beauty, the composition is simple and very effective with a lovely POV, the detail is nice and sharp and the colours are beautiful.

TFS Hilary :o)

Salut,

Superbe prise, belle couleur et nettetée. Le sujet est bien détaché du fond.

Merci du partage
Eric

Great birds shot.

Amaizng colors.

Such a rare DOF.

Great position.

All the best

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