Hi Rein I have moved my critique to your final posting as I believe it is of more value there. Regards Loot PS. The correction to the clouds is much improved in the final version.
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Hi Rein
I have moved my critique to your final posting as I believe it is of more value there.
Regards
Loot
PS. The correction to the clouds is much improved in the final version.