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Cabbage-white


Cabbage-white
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Copyright: martijn boltendal (martijn1990) (13)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-10-25
Categories: Insects
Camera: Nikon D50, Nikkor 28-80, Marumi 58mm UV
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-11-20 11:43
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Points: 0
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To batu: Hi Petermartijn1990 1 11-22 13:38
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Hello Martijn,
close-ups like this one are a difficult job. On your picture only a small section appears to have 'acceptable' sharpness ... the kink of the proboscis and a part of the compound eye. This is not enough to obtain a good evaluation. The aperture of f/5.6 is probably too 'large'. Clearly, if you work without a tripod, you will need short exposure times. But I think that 1/150 would have been sufficient concomitantly achieving a smaller aperture.
Point of view and composition are good. Background noise is a little bit high.
I hope that my comments may help!
Best wishes, Peter

P.S. I tried a workshop to improve the picture a little. I hope that you will like the result!

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