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Copyright: Enrico Pons (enrico) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 52 W: 2 N: 52] (433)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-22
Categories: Mountain
Camera: Yashica FX-3 Super 2000, Yashica 28mm f2.8, Fuji Provia 100
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Alpine landscapes (Switzerland) [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-11-23 6:31
Viewed: 5512
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Oberland
The Jungfraubahn stops inside the Eiger: you can get off the train and look at the landscape from a few windows in the north face of the mountain, which were opened during the construction works of the railway to throw out the material produced digging the tunnel...

Incredible!!
for more information on Jungfraubahn:
http://www.jungfraubahn.ch/en/DesktopDefault.aspx

This pic was a color slide, aquired with scanner and adjusted...
hope you like it.
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I like the ruggedness of this picture, but I would be tempted to crop out the rock face on the right. I find it distracting and am continually drawn to it when I want to look at the mountains against the sky line.

Hello Enrico!a beautiful shot! wonderful snow!
TFS

Hi, Enrico.
Beautiful mountain shot with nice glacier. Vivid colors. Good depth.

There is nice exposure on the whites in this image Enrico. I do agree about cropping out the right side. Because that area has the greatest contrast one can't help but be drawn to it. The rest of the imge is really nice though I feel it is a little undersaturated. There is some dust and noise in the sky which could easily be helped in pp. You do get to some beautiful places!

TFS
Evelynn : )

Hi Enrico,
Wow... like the cream... excellent view!
Great work!
Greetings,
Vanilla

Hello. Magnificent picture. But i think this picture is not a TrekNature photo, it was better on trekEARTH

Hi Enrico,
Love the shapes of the snow in the FG taking me further into the photo toward the high peak. I do agree with Evelynn, about the crop and do like the WS.
TFS,
Niek

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2006-11-26 16:58]

Hello Enrico, nice shot. Lovely exposure and details, the lighting is very good. I think I would have been tempted to crop away the dark on the right hand side. Well done.

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