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Ready to JUMP

Ready to JUMP
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Copyright: hasan prasetyo (hasboy) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 44 W: 0 N: 20] (215)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08-06
Categories: Insects
Camera: Minolta Dimage Z2, GT Lens 1:2.8-3.7
Exposure: 1/80 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Araneae (Spiders) [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-08-21 21:31
Viewed: 5697
Points: 22
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Still hunting in my garden...
Little spider, I dont know about this spider. body length just 7mm. attractive spider, and always jump to my camera when I shot.

please give me critique and comment about my photo. thanks ....

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It's a very nice one Hasan.
The spider is well taken, the colours of it are great, I love the eyes as a extra detail. The background is not realy spectaculair.But the good capture of the spider makes all good, Well done Hassan

  • gerhardt Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1936 W: 244 N: 4106] (11620)
  • [2004-08-22 2:37]

It is a very nice macro of this jumping spider (Salticidae family). They give quite a show when you get to close. The details and colours are nice. The eyes very lively. The backround is a bit bright but it does not bother me, just a nit.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2004-08-22 5:59]

Excellent, Ilike it. The background id bright but as a spider fan it doesn't bother me at all. Great focus on the eyes well done.

Oh wow, what beady eyes this chap has ;-))
Focus spot on, good DOF with only the hind legs falling outside the DOF range, nice colours.

Nice capture, Hasan, It has the "Will you take me home with you" look. Very pleasing, you can fix the BG, no great sweat, As Gehard mentioned.

Wow... que ojos... y cuantos!!!
Excelente captura Hasan.
Buena perspectiva y coloracion.
El fondo no ayudó mucho con sus colores, pero la imagen es muy buena en general.
Me atreví a realizar un trabajo... espero sea de tu agrado.

Wow... whoat eyes... and all that!
Excellent capture Hasan.
Good perspective and coloration.
The bottom did not help much with its colors, but the image in general is very good.
I dared to make a workshop, I hope you like it.

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  • AndyB Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1366 W: 32 N: 1351] (3982)
  • [2004-08-22 19:35]

A good shot.
Nice sharp detail,these spiders have amazing eyes!
A great capture,very well done.

A good macro Hasan.
The spider is very sharp with nice color.
WEll done

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 87 W: 50 N: 47] (130)
  • [2004-08-23 12:37]

i likze th ePOV here with the good detals on the spider..the BG i like less.Still a very good composition !!

oh, I have seen similiar ones, they look tough!

Great shop with very good details
Well done

Very nice jumping spider.
This must be the same species like the one
I have living near my keyboard (the same big, black front legs).
It's small but really brave!

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