I'm not sure about the edibility of the berries, but that is quite possible. I thought about originally doing a tighter crop similar to what you posted, but in the end I opted for displaying more of the cluster of plants instead of highlighting the sharpest ones. I must say though that I do like your crop and the bit of photoshop work that you did with it. Thnaks fo rtaking the time to critique and do the workshop.
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