Your information is much appreciated. However, offering it as a critique is not. Your remarks would have made an excellent comment, however. Critiques are about the photo only. Here are the rules about critiques.
"Critiques are to be used for any critical or praiseworthy comments about the critiqued photo. Very general critiques i.e. Nice shot, Great, I like it a lot! or similar comments are not particularly helpful, and therefore, are discouraged. Instead, critiques should include specific reasons as to why a photo is either good or needs improvement. "
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