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A little story


A little story
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Copyright: Murat KABACAN (mkabacan) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 116 W: 0 N: 11] (91)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-07-30
Categories: Birds
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-07-31 11:01
Viewed: 3125
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
There was a bird on the dead tree. As if it has been waited someone. Suddenly another bird came and perched another branch. Second bird was male and it needed a girlfriend. This alone beautiful female bird maid be suitible for itseflf. Maybe the both were good friends. But fisrt all he must offer to go out with her.
-Good afternoon, baby! said male bird.
-Good afternoon said female bird.
-If I'm suitible for you, would you like to go to the cinema with me? There is a new romantic love film.
-Oh, sir! Thanks but I'm waiting for my husband. He has went to find some food for our babies. His name is Mr. Eagle and nearly he will return.
-Mr Eagle? Saying male bird, as stammering. And hi is getting to flay, shout with a high volumed voice;
Sorry baby, the cinema must wait for another time, I have to go now.

My photography teacher everytime says "Every photo has a story, you the photographer have to show this story on the shot. This is the real photo."

I hope I menaged to reflect this story on my photo.

PS: Sorry, English is not my mother language and its possible to make mistake. Excuse me for the mstakes.
Regards.

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Merhaba Murat'cığım.
Fotoğraflarında kalite git gide yükseliyor. Kafanda kurguladığın hikayeye çok güzel bir şeklide detay vermişsin. Hikayeyi okuyunca fotoğrafta onu ben de hissettim. Selamlar. Durmaksızın çalışmaya devam...

Nice. I think the sparrow should be carefull, the shrike can be a dangerous bird.

Paul

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