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First attempt at writing (2)
shmalex (160)
Similar on first steps in this big and not clear world, it would be desirable to wish the kid and to catch still more many-many tasty worms

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shmalex (160)
crop and emphasis
Edited by:mesquens Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 168 W: 9 N: 287] (2073)

I had cropped for emphasise the principal motif of photo, the bird.